X-Men
#36
May 2008

Somewhere far from the coast of California and out in the Pacific Ocean, a large boat glided across the tame waters, a large search light atop a crow’s nest shining a beam over the ocean. Several men in militant clothing and body armor spread across the deck paced along the edges, automatic rifles at the ready, every one of them eying the waters - littered with the wreckage of a jet - for survivors.

Two of the men, enforcers for the enigmatic Byron Agency and members of the search and destroy party sent out to find the X-Men or what remained of their jet‘s crash, found themselves pacing about starboard bow.

“Man, it is firkin’ cold out here,” one of them remarked with a sigh.

“Why are we even still out here?“ the second asked, frustrated. “I mean, look at all of this debris and wreckage… Not even mutants coulda survived that.”

The other shrugged and nodded, his head still following the ledge. “Yeah, this search is pretty bogus.”

“Hey, at least it looks like the weather’s improving,” the first enforcer observed, eying the sky. The second turned to him and nodded, looking up to the sky, studying the dark clouds over head as they shifted about.

“Yeah, the X-Men got a weather manipulator with them,“ he said, taking a deep breath. “If she got killed in the crash, I bet that’d clear things up.”

A moment passed and the first enforcer looked back to his side, seeing that his partner had miraculously vanished. His eyes went wide in shock before he heard a footstep and looked over his shoulder, then turning about face, seeing that the first enforcer had suddenly reappeared behind him.

“Or it could just be the calm before the storm,” he suggested with a crooked grin.

“What the…?” the second enforcer started to say before the second struck him in the throat, prompting a harsh gagging reflex. “H-hurk!”

He dropped his gun and turned away from who he thought was his comrade, grasping at his throat and turning over the edge of the boat. The second enforcer put his boot to his back, kicking him overboard.

A search light fell upon the enforcer the exact moment the first enforcer hit the water, and the second enforcer turned toward the light and raised a forearm to cover his eyes.

“ALERT!” a voice called out. When the enforcer brought his arm down from over his face, he was actually the X-Woman known as Rogue, masculine build transforming into that of a lithe and curvy young woman… and a lithe and curvy young woman suddenly possessing the mutant ability of super-human speed.

“Open fire!” the commander bellowed from across the deck, drawing up his assault rifle and opening fire. His men followed suit.

Rogue dashed across the deck head-on into the gunfire, becoming a blur in the eyes of the enforcers and dodging streams of gunfire from all angles, before coming to a stop before the commander. She sent an uppercut into his face at the same super-speed utilized in her sprint, sending him into the air and overboard with extreme force, before she shot back across the deck, returning to a blur.

“She’s too fast!” an enforcer cried out before the blur sped passed him, crashing into him and knocking him back overboard. The blur continued on without hesitation.

“AGH!” another screamed as he was flung overboard. The random gunfire continued as the blur moved around the ship in unpredictable lines, striking and flinging enforcers about like rag dolls in a blur.

On the crow’s nest of the ship, high above the deck, two crewmen stood at the helm of a large search light and a mounted machine gun.

“Go get the mutant neutralization field online!” one barked.

“No way!” the other shouted back. “She’ll get me before I can reach the lower decks!”

Snikt sounded the metallic unsheathing of metal, interrupting the two crewmen’s bickering.

“It ain’t her you oughtta be afraid of, bub,” a low, gravely voice said from behind.

The two crewmen spun around instantly, seeing a short and stocky figure at the edge of the crow’s nest with three, foot long claws extended out of his knuckles. One of the men tried to draw a pistol from his hip, but the X-Man known as Wolverine rushed him and grabbed him by the shoulders, pulling him down and kneeing him in the solar plexus.

“Oof!” he cried out as the wind exploded from his lungs. The other man stumbled back to the edge of the crow’s nest as he fumbled with his holster, but before he could Wolverine turned about face and flung the first man into him. Both were carried over the edge of the crow’s nest and arced down into the ocean waters below.

Wolverine approached the edge of the crow’s nest and looked down into the waters, satisfied with his work. He dusted off his hands and turned toward port bow, running and leaping off of the edge of the crow’s nest, falling into a roll across the deck. There was a rush of air at his side as he stood upright, seeing that Rogue had slid to a stop at his side, having completely cleared the deck of men.

Before they could report on each other‘s work across the boat, there was a loud splash and a ship rocked slightly toward port bow. When the two X-Men in the direction of the movement, they saw just over a dozen men - guards and navigation crew alike - in black military fatigues encased in what resembled a large oak tree of ice, and a man similarly composed of ice crouched before it. The head and shoulders of the men, drenched in water with their helmets removed, poked out of what made up the branches and leaves of the oak tree.

“Did I miss any?” Iceman asked with a mischievous grin, hunching his brows. Rogue matched his expression with equal mischief.

“Nope, Ah think that’s all of ‘em,” she replied, shaking her head. She closed her eyes for but only a moment, but when she opened them they were glowing a rich, hot pink as she accessed the mutant power of telepathy from her catalogue of absorbed abilities. “Now let’s get t’ work…”


MARVEL 2000 PRESENTS...

"LAND OF CONFUSION"
PART FOUR

Written by Cory Wiegel


 
Cyclops
Cyclops

Phoenix
Phoenix

Beast
Beast

Storm
Storm

Iceman
Iceman

Rogue
Rogue

Cannonball
Cannonball

Domino
Domino

Wolverine
Wolverine


“Search Team to Base. Come back, Base.”

{{ This is Base, }} came a gruff response. {{ If this is your status report then it’s fifteen minutes late. }}

“I apologize, but we’ve encountered survivors,” the commander explained, clearing his throat. “Four to be exact. We’ve restrained them below deck and are bringing them back to base as ordered.”

{{ Good to hear. What of the other X-Men? }}

The commander paused, considering his choice of words. “Their… remains… are everywhere.”

{{ Alright. Collect what you can and return to base. Preparations have begun for the launch of the new network and all personnel are needed on hand. }}

“Roger that,” the commander replied. “Over and out.”

As if oblivious to the X-Men’s presence, the commander of the ship and his underlings quietly went about their business of returning to base.

“Looks like they bought it,” Iceman commented from the back of the navigation deck, eying the search team as they walked casually about the boat. “And the worker-ants are none the wiser.”

Wolverine nodded his head in agreement before turning his head towards Rogue and taking a puff off of his cigar. “Nice job, darlin‘. You‘re shapin‘ up to be quite the telepath. We gonna see ya strapped into Cerebro any time soon?”

“Ah’ll leave that t’ the pros, but thanks for the bid of confidence anyway, sugah,” Rogue said to Wolverine with a smirk, seemingly only paying half attention to her teammates. She was trying to remain focused on the ship’s crew.

Though she was only loosely familiar with a handful of the vast catalogue of powers she had access to her, Rogue’s telepathic training was adequate enough for her to manipulate and influence the small search and destroy crew of the ship for an indefinite amount of time. Such a feat didn’t cease to amaze her teammates.

“Oh, I love deception,” Iceman said flippantly as he leaned against a bulkhead, arms crossed with a smug grin on his face. “Next, do ya think you can get the Byron Agency to believe we made the Statue of Liberty disappear, too? Or how ‘bout something subtle, like there‘s a ring of soap scum in their bathtubs that no amount of scrubbing can get rid of?”

Rogue turned to her teammate and longtime friend, shooting him a smile and a wink as she sat in the lotus position on the floor of the ship. “First things first, ah gotta get Scott’s plan in action. Now ya’all wanna keep it down and lemme work? This sorta thing don’t come as easy to us copycats…“

Wolverine and Iceman shook their heads, Iceman chuckling slightly. Wolverine nodded to her and took another puff off of his cigar.

“Sure, darlin’. Do what you gotta do."


The first thing Sean Cassidy felt as he awoke in his cell in the Byron Agency’s compound was the cold and hard steel bench that he was laying on. The second was the painful throbbing in the back of his head, the knot in the upper left side of his forehead, and the weight of his aching body as he tried to sit up right.

Before he had the ability to process what had happened and where he was at, it became quickly apparent that he was not alone.

“Top o’ the morning’ to ye,” came a voice poorly imitating an Irish accent.

Sean squinted as he adjusted himself under his own weight, able to lean against the concrete wall the bench was attached to, but still barely keeping himself from toppling over. He recognized the voice instantly.

Agent Philip Layton of the Byron Agency stood up from a stool on the other side of the cell and fished through a pocket in his black sports coat. It took only a moment for him to retrieve a Zippo lighter to compliment the cigarette in his ear. Whether it was out of stubbornness or an inability to do so, he noticed that Sean wouldn’t meet his stare. That just made Agent Layton have to work harder to suppress a smirk.

“How’s the ol’ noggin’, friend?” he asked said as he approached Sean‘s cell, putting the cigarette to his mouth and flipping open the Zippo. He lit up and took a long drag, pocketing the Zippo and exhaling. “I’ve really got to hand it to you, Cassidy. You sure gave it to us back there, even when you knew there was no chance in Hell you’d escape. Still got that fighting X-Men spirit in you, eh?”

Sean didn’t reply, prompting a proud and cocky grin to develop on Agent Layton’s face as he stared a hole through the former X-Man.

“Speaking of which, your little plan didn’t quite work as we expected,” he continued. “The search team found four survivors and are bringing them back to base now. Floating out there on the wreckage of their jet, clinging to dear life.”

Silence filled the air as Sean let the words sink in and Agent Layton relished in the former X-Man’s unsettled demeanor. For all of Sean’s talk, Layton knew that he was merely a pawn in their game. A sucker. All of the Byron Agency’s talk about setting a confused world right, ending the chaos and disorder that had filled numerous lives no matter what the cost so that the future wouldn‘t have to suffer the same fate… There was truth to it, but ultimately their goal went beyond on that.

Power. Control. Money. The Byron Agency’s motivations were as simple as that and the metahuman defense network would give the Hierarchy everything they desired once they completed the project and could market it to a superpower under the guise of a sister company. In the back of his mind, Sean had feared this to be the truth, but there were other fears and… curiosities… that he had in regards to the X-Men’s fate at his and the Byron Agency’s hands.

“Go on. You know you want to ask it.”

“Who did ye find…?” Sean asked under his breath, emotionally adrift.

Agent Layton’s lips curled up to one side of his face as he shrugged casually.

“We don’t know, but don’t think there’s going to be some last minute rescue,” he said with the shake of his finger, his demeanor patronizing. Sean looked up suddenly and Agent Layton had to suppress a grin. “They wouldn’t want to save you even if they could. You know it. We‘ll be activating the metahuman defense network the moment your old friends are on the island, both as a precaution and as our first official test.”

Sean shook his head. “How do ye plan on testing it on them if they’re already captured?”

“We’ll just have to wait and see, now won’t we?” Agent Layton said, hunching his brows at Sean. He took a final drag of his cigarette before dropping it to the ground and stomping it out, then turned away from the former agent and walked away. “See you around, Cassidy. Enjoy your thoughts while you‘ve still got ‘em.”

With Agent Layton gone, Sean turned his attention back to the floor of his cell, head hanging low. He ran his hands through his hair and closed his eyes, and a moment later the loud clang of the door to the makeshift prison sounded as it closed.


The search team’s boat traveled across the pacific ocean notably slower than its maximum speed, but that was to be expected with a decommissioned spy plane being towed on the back of it. The Blackbird was in a state of disrepair due to the Sentinel that self-destructed over it, both wings severed and entire sections of the hull torn from it by the explosion, but the interior of the jet remained relatively intact if not with its systems heavily damaged.

It was in the cargo area of the jet that Cyclops and Storm planned out the X-Men’s next move. Phoenix, Beast, Domino, and Cannonball were scattered about the jet, chatting quietly amongst themselves as they recovered from the battle they had just incurred on the U.S.S. Avenger while Rogue, Iceman, and Wolverine acted as security on the search boat towing them back to the Byron Agency’s base of operations. It was the calm before the storm… a calm that ended when Cyclops and Storm had worked out the final details of their plan.

“Gather around everyone,” Cyclops called out across the Blackbird, waving his teammates in. Their conversations ended as their attention turned to their two leaders, approaching them as requested. “Ororo and I have gone through the tanker’s navigation database and we wanted to talk about what we found.”

Storm typed a few commands into the console, causing a three-dimensional model of an island to appear on the overhead monitor. It was largely tropical in appearance, but on the east end rested a shipping dock with a paved road leading to a large compound, surrounded by fences. To the west of that complex was an open field with another similar road leading to a heliport. However, what stood out the most about the island was the large Sentinel sitting atop the compound.

It was a Mastermold.

“It appears as if this is where the Byron Agency has been manufacturing the Sentinels that we encountered earlier tonight,” Storm explained, gesturing to the compound. “As you can all see, it’s a fully-functional Mastermold facility.”

“Ah don’t get it, though,” Cannonball interjected, visibly confused. “Why would the Byrons be sendin’ already completed Sentinels to a Mastermold?”

Storm glanced to Cyclops, who fielded the question for her. “We talked about that and agree that the shipment was probably meant to be a trap.”

“Why do you think that?” Phoenix asked of her husband.

“We found Robert Kelly alive after the Byron Agency stripped his mind of whatever it was they wanted, right?“ Cyclops said, warranting a nod from half of the team. He took a deep breath and went on. “At first, I just assumed that Sean was involved somehow and didn’t have the stomach to kill him, but now we think it was done to lure us into a battle with those kamikaze Sentinels.”

The answer drew only silence from the X-Men. It made sense, however frightening the idea was that their former friend and teammate would do such a thing. Stealing the Xavier Protocols, capturing their teammates and subjecting them to experiments, conspiring with Sinister to manipulate the government, and now this…

Beast brought a hand to his forehead and rubbed the tension from it. “That sounds like a very real possibility,” he said, disappointment in his voice. “Now I can’t help but wonder if Sean was involved in that.”

“I wouldn’t doubt it if he was,” Cyclops remarked, his face seemingly stone. “Whatever’s happened to Sean in recent months, he’s our enemy now and the Byron Agency has to be stopped. Regardless if Sean was involved, the gamble didn’t work and now we know where their manufacturing base is. I think we need to act quickly.”

“Rally the troops, sound the call to arms,” Domino said, looking to Cannonball and nodding. “We can make a call to Warpath and Siryn.”

“Warren and his team are on reserve,” Phoenix added, already thinking up reserve and former X-Men alike to contact.

“The communications system is still down,” Beast interjected, “but with some work I can most likely get it operational in the next couple of hours,”

“That’s not what I mean, you guys,” Cyclops chimed in with the shake of his head. They looked to him, uncertain of what he was getting at. Storm explained it to them this time.

“Even with the search and destroy team’s memories altered, the Byron Agency have telepaths working for them. Without concrete evidence of our demise, they’ll likely discover the truth sooner or later.”

Cannonball found himself reluctantly agreeing with Cyclops and Storm. “And if it’s sooner they may pack up an’ skedaddle right quick…”

“Exactly,” Storm said.

“We’re going to need to hit them with everything and everyone we have, even Hank and Jean. With all of us here and their crew at our disposal, we’re in the best position we’re going to get to strike,” Cyclops laid it out for them. “They won’t expect us, not right now, and I think we can end this tonight. The only question is… are you all in?”

Everyone knew the risks, but it was difficult for anyone to disagree. Their silence was an answer that anyone who had ever been associated with the “X” understood. Cyclops nodded slowly, knowing that the choice was never an easy one.

“Alright. We’re going to split up into two teams then,” he said, looking to Cannonball and Domino first. “Cannonball, Domino, and Wolverine are with me as the ‘captives’ that the search team has recovered,“ he then motioned to Storm. “Once we’re in, Storm will lead a direct assault on the compound with the rest of you while we track down the ringleaders. The goal is to tear this place down from the inside-out.”

“Uh, question?” Domino said, hand raised and waving half-heartedly. “We just nearly got it handed to us on a sinking ship by suicide-bombing Sentinels. On top of the fact that most of us are beat from a fight with a dozen Sentinels, what’s to keep a hundred suicide-bombing Sentinels from trashing us on their own turf?”

“Tony Stark has reason to believe that the Byron Agency was working on an experimental assault and defense network for the Department of Defense before they were exposed,” Storm answered. “If he’s right, they will likely be trying to market it elsewhere and won‘t want to risk damaging it unless they absolutely have to. This island is the perfect test site for that network.”

Domino was visibly uncomfortable with that logic, as were the other X-Men, but they quietly accepted the prospect of Sentinels self-destructing as a risk they had to take.

“One way or another, the place will be leveled come morning,” Cyclops mused, a hint of cynicism in his voice. “If there aren’t any more questions, then I think we should use this time to prepare for the attack. We should be to the island within the hour…”


Three men in their late forties to late fifties stood in dark business suits before the large, industrial-size sliding doors in the receiving bay of a compound with a dozen armed men at their backs. Two of the men were white, likely Eastern European in ancestry, while the third was distinctly Japanese.

The backgrounds of the security force at their backs were harder to decipher what with the black military fatigues covering their bodies and the visored-helmets covering all but the lower halves of their faces. Such a uniform appearance reflected the three men’s view regarding the individuals that made up the security - faceless and dispensable arms tasked to do their bidding.

Richard Normandin was a tall and slender man with hair the color of salt and pepper parted on the left, cold and distant in demeanor. Jeremiah Stell was only a few inches shorter than Richard, but much stockier in build with medium brown hair and graying temples slicked back with gel. And finally, Benjamin Shimizu was the shortest of the three with a medium build, black hair parted down the middle.

Together, they made up the remains of the Hierarchy - the three largest shareholders of the Byron Agency not in hiding or in prison - and it was in their last remaining base of operations that they awaited the return of the search team that had retrieved the surviving X-Men from their crash not two miles from the island.

When the sliding doors of the receiving bay parted, the early morning light peaked into the dimly lit compound and cast. Three men and a woman were marched into the receiving bay by the aforementioned search team with their arms shackled at their backs and collars around their necks, each with a blinking light at its center. The man known as Wolverine, short and muscular with wild hair, was dragging his feet the most out of the four and for that he took a rifle butt to the back of his head.

“Argh!” Wolverine groaned as he stumbled to the ground on his knees, having lost his balance quite easily due to his arms having been shackled.

“Get up and keep movin’!” one of the search team’s numbers said, prepared to strike him again. Wolverine looked up to him and growled lowly under his breath, but begrudgingly complied under the glares of his teammates. The search team continued marching the four into the receiving bay towards the Hierarchy.

“Ah, it looks like our guests have arrived,” Mr. Normandin stated, eying the four.

“They don’t look very bad…” Mr. Shimizu remarked suspiciously.

“No, they don’t,” Mr. Stell agreed, visibly uncomfortable. He looked to Shimizu. “Cassidy looks worse and security only beat the snot out of him.”

Mr. Normandin shook his head at the two‘s comments, letting out a deep sigh. “Why would they be injured?” he asked, directing to Domino, Cannonball, and Wolverine respectively. “Luck factor, force field, and healing factor.”

“True enough, I suppose,” Mr. Shimizu said with a shrug, but Mr. Stell didn’t appear so convinced. It was then the search party approached the three with their captives.

“Sir,” the commander greeted with a nod. The X-Men remained quiet, guns at their backs and heads down seemingly in defeat.

“Good job, men,” Mr. Normandin commented, looking the commander straight in the eye. “You can bet there will be a bonus for you and your men out of this.”

The commander hunched his brows, half-enticed by the notion. He returned his mind strictly to business. “Where do you want them?”

“I think we’ll want to send the leader straight to the telepaths. Get whatever we can out of him about the X-Men’s operations. The other three…” Mr. Normandin trailed off, considering their options.

“Might want to continue where we left off with those experiments,” Mr. Shimizu suggested with a steady, certain nod.

“I agree,“ Mr. Stell said. “It’s just too bad we don’t have the other two.”

“The girls?” Mr. Normandin asked, raising a brow.

“Yeah. They sure had some lungs on them,” Mr. Stell explained with half a smirk, shaking his head. “The way that little Asian one screamed…”

Mr. Normandin shook his head, but more in disgust than in anything else. “Broke my heart. Always crying.”

“Broke my eardrums,” Mr. Stell said with a cruel, hearty laugh joined by several of the other security personnel and search team members. Mr. Normandin and Mr. Shimizu shook their heads, repressing the urge to join in out of bad taste. They would soon discover that it was in their best interest not to do so.

Wolverine’s head slowly shot up, his brow hardened and his eyes narrowed as a rage built deep inside of him as he watched a number of their “captors” relish in the agony of what had to have been Jubilation Lee. His muscles tensed and he flexed his arms in their shackles as he prepared to break the team’s plan.

Cyclops shot a look to Wolverine and shook his head, whispering, “Logan, no, don’t!”

“Armis Exposcere Pacem,” Wolverine muttered a trigger-phrase through gritted teeth. The armed members of the search team surrounding the X-Men suddenly became alert, ceasing their laughter as their eyes grew blank and Rogue’s post hypnotic suggestion activated. Their shift in demeanor didn’t go unnoticed.

“What’s wrong with…?“ Mr. Shimizu began to say as the search team drew their rifles on the Hierarchy’s security team. The shackles and dampening collars fell off all four of the X-Men simultaneously, clanging against the ground of the receiving bay, and catching the attention of Mr. Stell.

He had no time to react, however, as Wolverine unsheathed his six, foot long adamantium claws and flung himself through the air at the once hysterical Mr. Stell, who could then only scream in horror.

“AAAGHH!!” was the last sound that escaped from Jeremiah Stell‘s throat before the rage-filled Wolverine pounced on his chest, knocking him on his back, and slamming a fist into his throat. The claws slid straight out of the back of Mr. Stell‘s throats, and Wolverine covered the man‘s mouth with his other hand as blood began overflowing from the stocky man’s mouth.

“H-h-hh..urk…”

Mr. Normandin and Mr. Shimizu scrambled in opposite directions as a member of the Hierarchy‘s security team cried out, “Their dampeners are off! Open fire!”

Before the security team could open fire, the search team under the X-Men’s control waved the barrels of their rifles in circular motions and unleashed sporadically aimed gunfire at their comrades. There was no intended target as the search team had only been telepathically instructed to lay down cover fire for the X-Men, but the security team darted off for cover while returning fire regardless. Wolverine, who was still poised atop Mr. Stell as he drowned in his own blood, was the first to be riddled with bullets and driven back by the security team.

Like the two remaining members of the Hierarchy, Cyclops, Domino, and Cannonball ran for cover as the gun fight began. The search team was providing the cover they needed to regroup and then take out the security team and Hierarchy with less deadly measures, but one of the X-Men noticed that something - other than Wolverine’s preemptive, rage motivated outburst - had not gone according to plan.

“Uhh… Cyke!” Cannonball yelled over the gunfire, visibly concerned. Cyclops brought a hand to his visor and pressed down the release, but nothing came.

As gunfire and screams filled the receiving center of the compound, the leader of the X-Men and his teammates came to a terrifying realization. Even though their shackles and power dampeners were off, their powers still weren’t working.


At the east end of the compound at the crack of down, where only a dirt path separated the fortified stone wall of the Byron Agency’s compound and the island’s tropical shrubbery, a red headed woman emerged from the surrounding forest followed closely by four others.

“Here we are,” Phoenix announced, taking a deep breath as she mentally prepared for what was more than likely a fight stacked against her and her teammates.

“Robert,” Storm said with a nod.

“On it,” Iceman replied. He waved a hand out in front of him and a trail of ice followed along the fortified gate, causing it to become frigid and brittle. “You’re up, Mississippi.”

Rogue squatted down and leapt toward the gate, propelled like a rocket by a maroon energy field that allowed her to shatter the gate with explosive force.

“Let’s go to town!”

The perimeter of the compound was left with a gaping entrance, one littered with ice and stone at its foot, that the X-Men flooded through. Storm and Rogue by the air, Iceman on a bridge of ice, and Phoenix and Beast by foot. They met no opposition from the empty yard of the compound, only the silence of their enemy’s foothold stunning them. Something was wrong.

“Everyone, spread out and prepare for incoming,” Storm called down from the air while she scouted the yard of the compound. “Defensive positions.”

The X-Men did as their team leader ordered, spreading out amongst themselves and preparing for the worst. To their credit, the worst came.

In the distance, a purple and red figure shot out of the Mastermold on rocket thrusters at its feet, its head directed upwards and its arms at its side. At first the figure seemed alone, but then two followed suite in a similar fashion. Then three more followed the two just as quickly and then six followed the three, before a quick stream of purple and red robots formed out of the compound and into the sky.

“My stars and garters…” Beast gasped. His teammates stood in equal shock and awe as a swarm of Sentinels flew out of the back of the Mastermold resting atop the compound and began filling the sky like locusts.

“That’s… one helluva big network…” Rogue remarked, almost forgetting to breathe as hundreds of genocidal killing machines took the sights on the X-Men.

“Um… I’ve seen bigger…” Iceman quipped, swallowing back the lump in his throat and clearing his throat. “I think…”


NEXT ISSUE: This is it. The final showdown between the X-Men and the Byron Agency, but so far it doesn’t look like the fight is going to go the way our heroes expected. Will Cyclops’ team survive being smack-dab in the heart of the battle without their powers? Can Storm’s team overcome the largest army of Sentinels the X-Men have ever faced? And when the dust settles, what will be the fate of the former X-Man, Sean Cassidy and his backstabbing cohorts, the Byron Agency? Find out in X-Men Annual 2008!


PRIME ADJECTIVELESS DIRECTIVE

Got any primary adjectiveless concerns regarding this ish? Rock!

First review comes from Anthony Crute, writer of the fan favorite and now ongoing Doc Samson series over in the Knights Branch. If you haven’t checked it out then you’re really missing out! Take ‘er away, Anthony.

I said I'd give feedback so sorry it took so long.

First up who can't love the idea of the big fight at the end of an arc taking place on a boat (look at the Goonies)...which is constantly shifting along with the action.

The characters as I'm coming to expect were spot on as far as I'm concerned. I especially liked some of the things you did with Domino and her comments in this issue.

Sam and Bobby's one liners were also great parts too as I think it shows their characters greatly.

One of my favourite parts was the portrayal which is carrying on form previous issues of Cyclops 'slide' with the bazooka comments.

With the big reveal at the end I also assume this is a character which has been in M2K in the past but I haven't read that...I still think I can understand the shock value of it (given the previous times that the X-mens tech turned against them.)

Nice issue

Thanks once again for the good words, Anthony. This issue was a lot of fun to write, as were the characters you mentioned, and I’m glad the shock value at the end wasn’t totally lost on you. To be honest, I wasn’t sure how many people would pick up on it, but it was a loose thread I wanted wrapped up.

The character of Cerebro, as a sentient hologram, was introduced shortly after The Twelve/Apocalypse 2000 storyline that ran through the X-Branch back in 2003 after the X-Men’s original Cerebro was destroyed. Exactly when he became corrupted was always played pretty loosely, but some of us surmise that he always was. He openly turned on the X-Men to aid the Byron Agency at the end of X-Men #21 and seemingly self-destructed when he was discovered, but as you can see here, his demise has been greatly exaggerated. Hopefully you enjoy where this goes!

Our second review comes from David McNamara, a new reader and soon to be new writer at Marvel 2000! Everyone give him a warm round of applause and keep an eye out for his name in future releases. Let’s see what he has to say about one of his first reading experiences at the site and in the X-Branch…

First off hi! I've only started looking around the M2k site and board lately. This is mainly because of Crutey and Hunter plugging it over at thehouseofideas.net. (hi guys J ) I didn't really know where to start so I just threw myself in the deep end and decided to read X-Men #35 first. I write a few X-Men titles over at THOIN and this is my first real proper look at fan fiction outside of it (bar Hunter's Aquaman).

Hey-ey, it’s always nice to know that a little promotion from current readers is attracting new readers to the site. Thanks, Crute and Hunter!

Anyway on with the review...

First off I like the cast of this X-team, they are all favourites and classic members and then we have the odd addition of Domino. She works with this cast though and helps give them the edgy feel I got from this issue. I liked her interaction with Scott and Wolverine, I can imagine as a character she feeds well off Logan and that seemed to come through a little in this. Generally she was written very well I thought, she had a no nonsense actiony thing going on (wow check out my descriptive abilities there).

Woo! Glad that everyone’s been into Domino lately. She hasn’t played a very large role in the series, but she seems to attract positive feedback regardless. It’s funny you mention the cast, too. Everyone seems to love it because it’s a sort of all-star team or think it’s too traditional and needs some spice. It’s possible that’s why Bea’s getting so much love, but I digress… You’ll be seeing a lot more of Domino in action come the annual next month!

The character I really found myself liking in this was Cannonball. I liked his action, his little quips. As the youngest on this team (I think) it was cool to see him able to handle himself with confidence.

Yep, Cannonball’s the youngest on this team, but he’s no rookie by any means. It’s good to know that you like that about him. He’s another character who should stand out in the annual, so look out for him, too!

Storm was well done too, I liked the way you used and described her powers.
The plot was actually more or less guessable which I liked as this is the third chapter of this arc I jumping on board with. I'm not 100% on the details so I might go back and read the first two ones. I seem to have come in on the big action issue, which Im pretty happy about but I gonna go get the backstory a bit more first so I can put it in context.

I’m always worried about new readers jumping on, especially as I’ve been working on this Byron Agency for quite some time, so hopefully you’re not to lost. If possible, I would recommend reading the first two issues of this arc, but it’s almost over with now so you may be better off waiting for my new direction coming up quickly.

Also, Storm and Iceman’s scene was a kick to write for me, so it’s great to hear that you felt Ororo stood out even among all of the other characters and fights that were going on. This was a busy issue and I’d hate to see anyone fall through the cracks.

My favourite thing about this issue was Banshee. He's my favourite character (I'm Irish) and I love it when people do a good job writing him. I like that he is the sort of bad guy in this, he has always had a darker side to him and I like where you are taking that. You handled his powers well and Im glad you were able to portray him as able to handle himself in hand to hand as well. That was a well written fight scene. I can't wait to see where you will take this.

Now this is a bit of a good news to me. I’m really glad that you dug that final scene because in all honesty I was going to cut it down. Banshee’s in an interesting place at Marvel 2000 and I’ve sort of been tasked with finding a way to justify his villain-esque behavior, yet stay true to character. If nothing else, it was a lot of fun having him get his hands dirty at the end there.

Anyway I've gone on enough, I really enjoyed this and will definately be coming back for more. If I get the chance to read the first two bits of this arc Ill let ya know what I think! Nice one.

Hehe, you can never go on enough about me, David! I appreciate the support. Hopefully X-Men #36 was to your liking, too, even though it was more of a “calm before the storm” issue. Let me tell you though, next issue is going to be one hell of a storm! See you all then.

- Cory Wiegel
   May 11th, 2008